 How
to Write Bad Poetry:
If at first you don't succeed, don't try again!
So you've decided to crown yourself with a title that a million other people (just like
you (yes, just like you!)) give themselves everyday. Some people believe giving yourself
such a title is equivalent to, and just as beneficial monetarily, as naming yourself Queen
of England. But, there is no grace, rarely enough publicity, and only the title of Court
Jester seems to be becoming for you because you are a fool among others.
What is this sacred title? Poet.
Why does titling yourself a 'poet' make you a Fool? Well, it doesn't, not in and of
itself. But if you've only been published online, never in print - that could be a sign of
your well-earned Fool status. To be blunt; that is a sign that you write bad poetry.
Why would these sites accept your work if it sucked, you ask? Maybe to raise their quota,
maybe to get more submissions of the site's particular interest, but mainly to
actually HAVE something to post - most (but not all) sites are desperate for submissions.
Or maybe they're out for a profit. Come on, who among us HASN'T had something accepted by
the National Library of Poetry, and then gotten all the brochures for expensive products
featuring our work?
The Webmaster vs. Editor Problem: Go to any website, check it out. Can you find someone
with the title of Webmaster? How about editor? Or, still yet, Webmaster AND Editor?
A Webmaster does not, by any means, mean Editor. Simply because someone is a webmaster
(someone who controls the site, updates the postings, etc. . . ) does not mean that the
person is an EDITOR (someone who corrects the work, proofreads, re-writes, re-words,
etc.,) of the work posted on the site. In many cases, webmasters who are disguising
themselves as editors are giving real editors a bad name. A webmaster, will too
often post submissions “as is” and not give a damn about the content or
presentation. However, if a site has someone who can both edit and be a webmaster then the
site is moving in the right direction.
This is the main problem source. Building a website, and getting work
“published” on a website is so easily done by anyone whether they have talent or
not that it de-values the word “published” and lessens the role of an Editor.
Granted, the internet IS a great marketing tool for promoting your work, getting your name
in the public's eye, and getting writing experience, but have you ever asked yourself why
your work is ONLY published online? Perhaps it is because no discerning EDITOR has ever
seen your dribbly poems, except in browsing the web for bad poems to laugh at.
Here are a few tips that will help you to get your work published online. Hey, I figured
if you're going to be a fool about getting your unpolished work published on the internet
for the world to see, I'd give a few tips to help your bad poetry stay that way, since you
seem to like that way best:
1. Place the word “Love” in your title. That's a major
plus!
2. Be straight-forward, don't use symbols, metaphors or anything that
will make the reader think. Readers don't have time to think
3. Focus on form-(sonnets, villanelles, haiku). Since you think in form,
write in form.
4. Keep your poem in a rhyme-scheme. Why? Well, EVERYONE knows that
all GOOD poems rhyme, the rest can be disregarded as a post-modern mess!
5. Only write in YOUR point of view. Write exactly what you believe,
never try to portray the image of someone else. Better yet, start the poem with
“I”.
6. Keep your poems untitled. Readers love to be creative and imagine what
the title should and could be.
7. Write in the same place. If you write in your bedroom - always
write there; if you write outside under a tree - always write there---why try variety and
ruin a good thing?
8. Don't ever base a character in a poem on someone you actually KNOW.
Heaven forbid you get the piece published, and have to explain to the
person—“this is you”.
9. Read, but if you don’t like a poem or a poet—just toss it.
Don’t even question why you don’t appreciate the work.
10. Have no structure. Poetry is about limitless expressions,
right? So in that sense, make your lines and stanzas as long as you
wish. Just write exactly how you feel!
11. Don’t keep a journal. Journal causes too much self-reflection
and you want to write for the moment, not yesterday.
12. Use clichés as much as possible. People like to read familiar
phrases.
13. Not every line of a poem is important. Just make sure you have a good
first and last line.
14. Poems don’t progress, that’s the difference between a story
and a poem. Poems aren’t suppose to take you on a journey to learn.
15. Submit your poems to only websites. That way, you will never have to
face the fact that your poetry SUCKS, because it will only be read by the friends and
relatives to whom you give the site’s URL, and your friends will never tell you that
reading your poetry is greater torture than letting a small, sharp-clawed guinea pig walk
on their sunburned skin.
If you follow these guidelines, and start writing, you will be a “poet” in no
time. Remember that poetry HAS to rhyme, and remember that the less you practice the
better you are.
Joking aside—you might want to try doing exactly opposite of the “tips” in
the list. And, since many webmasters (who are titling themselves Editor) aren’t doing
their job, it’s up to you to learn to edit your work before you embarrass yourself.
(This article is not commenting that ALL online poetry is not well-crafted. But the poorly
crafted poetry far outweighs the well-written by a landslide.)
Stephen E. Jordan, II is Editor/Publisher of OutStretch Publications;
Financial Editor in Manhattan; and Poet. Article is available for reprint. Please notify
the author. Copyright © 2001. www.OutStretch.net, Editor@OutStretch.net
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